Story rewrite.

In the forest located north west from the Wisturnia providence. A lone crow glides across the canopy. It caws intensely when it found the person it was looking for.

"One of my messenger crows." A boy with black messy hair, cloaked in a black coat, reaches for the letter the crow was carrying. "The Stormlight family sigil."
The boy takes his right glove off and bits into his thumb so it bleeds. He press his bloody thumb onto the sigil. The sigil ignites with a small flame and burned away. The boy opens the envelope and reads the letter.
The letter reads.
"To Master Vion.
If you are reading this the letter has been correctly delivered to you. We are sending you to Charo Town across the Milo plains. The town folks have been harassing about unusual light and craters around their town. Since you are around that area. We decided it is much more efficient to send you to end their harassing than to send a team to investigate.

From,
Shiona."

"Thank you, you may leave now." Vion releases the crow as it flies back from the opposite direction.

He leaps from the canopy into the forest.

"Charo Town is east from the Ilos Forest waterfall lake."

Vion navigates his way through the forest as he is greeted by the wildlife. He grabs a fruit from a nearby tree and greets some merchants making their way to the city. He follows the roaring sounds of the waterfall.

He takes a short break when he reaches the waterfall lake. A large lake formed by the falling waters on top of a large cliff with towering trees. Many animals come here to drink. Vion follows their examples and drink from the clear waters.

"The water is very cold." He comments about the freezing temperature of the water he washes his face the chilling waters awakes the young man. He squints his eyes as something from the side of the cliff catches his eye.

Vion saw a humanly figure falling head down into the lake and the figure crashes into the cold lake. "That is not good." Vion takes off his coat and dives into the lake. He swam across the freezing water to where the person fall. He frantically searches and finds a cloaked figure. Vion swims back to shore with the unconscious person. Vion gently puts the cloaked person onto the ground. He takes off the soaking hood underneath was a face of a young girl. Petite, pale white skin sky blue hair and a unusual purple face mark. She was carrying a purple bow.

"A girl? Please wake up." Vion checks her heart beat Vion applies cardiopulmonary resuscitation on the unconscious girl.
The girl shortly coughs out the water.
"She is still unconscious. I should get her out of this wet cloak." as Vion tries to help the girl, after he unveils from her cloak he realise she was not wearing clothes underneath. "On second thoughts maybe I should not do that." the shy boy talking to himself.
He first covers the girl with his coat and close his eyes while slowly taking off her soak cloak.

He wrings out the water from the girl's ragged cloak folds it and puts it besides the girl before heading into the woods to get some burnable wood. He sets up a fire and a cloth rack allow their clothes to dry and him and the girl to warm up.